Hm...really good. Loved the part with the far and the mud...I could just picture it. This BOOK sounds more and more ominous

Hmm...why do I not like the coincidence meeting of that 'business man? Really, really enjoying this. I like that Nigel is hesitant about the book, who could blame him, and I like that you are incorporating some of Derek's thoughts as well. Next chapter please :)

Okay...something just ain't right with Patrick. I suspect he is gonna break Claudia's heart and is really after what Syd and Nigel have...or will have. I loved the scene's with Mafdet, reminded me of my own cat...whom I still miss. Sigh./ Good job, on to the next.

Really good chapter. I laughed out loud at the noodle thing. My sister is a Leftie and I know about that too! LOL. It's true everyone draws on the table at Montana's. I like your flashback with Derek, I always wondered how he became Derek. very good...on to the next.

What? Don't they sleep together? Aw..comon! *grin. very interesting so far, got my willies up wondering about how this Book works. Perfect reading this close to Halloween. Update soon, I can't wait to see what happens!

very good start, I like this. No idea where it is going yet but it is intriguing. I like the banter between Nigel and Claudia and the little bits of affection between Sydney and Nigel. I have an idea Patrick is bad news, but am very interested in the ship. I love ships. More please.

Hm...very interesting take. I am really liking this so far. Will there be more? Can't wait to see where you will go with it.