Running away...

interesting concept for the story, and very well executed. I like it, though am not familiar with the fandom.

Heads up: it's "free rein," not "free reign."

Reins are what you have on a horse, so to have "free rein" is to be uncontroled.

To reign is to take command, and it is usually someone with absolute authority who does that. Usually kings and whatnot.

Hope you find these comments helpful.

I know next to nothing about Avatar, but I suppose knowledge of the series only adds an extra layer of understanding to the story.

It's a fairly well-written piece (some grammar, but those are potshots), though I couldn't help but feel that it was another depiction of another rebellious teenager who's trying to prove herself.

...then again, maybe that extra layer of understanding would help in that matter.

Going on the theme of life-changing event, this one certainly qualifies. (I'm guessing that she later does something pretty important... correct?) It's not too long, which is a good thing, because I'm fairly sure I would've been lost if it were just a bit longer.

Good job. I like it.

Ooh I liked this! I have no idea who these people are, but I didn't need to either. I understood exactly what the character was feeling and why she felt like she needed to get away. Very good! Thanks for playing!

Sounds great so far. I'd love to read more!

Nicely written and the best part was the fact that it wasn't too wordy. Some good writers tend to flaunt their vocabulary by using it all at once. But thats not the point. I Love Toph as a character and u did a good job with her. Nice and short, yet the story says a lot. Good job.