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sorcerousfang
2009-08-25 . chapter 2
oh, that was amusing. Very amusing. Great job, and the ending, classic. two thumbs up!
Ivi90
2009-07-05 . chapter 2
I really like that story.They bet.Xaxax.
FallenRaindrops
2009-05-24 . chapter 2
LOVED IT!
Ayjah
2009-04-28 . chapter 2
LOL awesome!!
TsubasaSyaoforever
2009-04-09 . chapter 2
LOL~!!

This was funny and cute, keep it up!
Felling
2009-01-15 . chapter 2
You have to be one of my most favorite authors at this exact god-damned moment.
I am AMAZED.
The anime and manga bugged me for SO long, making me so sad that it was never Mai that offered to bring him to his room. Then you write it like a god and even add an extra of exactly what I had always wanted to happen. I am so happy right now that words can't express it. :D
Thank you so much. ~
-T/M
LunaxXmoongoddessXx
2008-06-30 . chapter 2
this is pretty entertaining, i can't wait to keep on reading. it's great
alana124pyro
2008-06-05 . chapter 2
ahahaha, greatness.

rock on and payce out.
randomPerson
2008-04-06 . chapter 2
that was HiLaRiOuS!! i loved it.
nArCiSsTiC wOnDeR
2008-04-06 . chapter 2
lol those guys r such **wits... nice job, btw
Lady Light
2008-04-03 . chapter 2
lol Great fic!
Aufera
2008-04-02 . chapter 2
Cute :) really liked it
Azamiko
2008-03-30 . chapter 2
I like the ending. I have to admit, though, that the wording when Naru and Mai are discussing why she didn't leave was a bit confusing.
Nayami-Chan
2008-03-28 . chapter 2
lol i loved it thanx :)
keywordparamore
2008-03-28 . chapter 2
this is so great! i love it!
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