This story is probably one of my favorites. Update!

Damn, girl! I didn't think you'd brek this chapter up into parts. The next part won't be long? I hope you know what you're doing.

Matau's a good friend =w= At least, a better friend than he was in canon XD

But! Vakama and Nokama are together again! Interesting way for them to meet indeed...I really want to know what happens next.

I'm going to have to look for the anime this was based off of though, for sure.

Keep writing! =D

Wow, Teridax is MEAN O.O

I wonder who Vak's mom is though...and I find myself seriously hoping that he and Nokama manage to meet again XD

Zaktan's Matau's dad? Why does this fact amuse me so much? XD

Update soon!

Interesting... so, it's a Bionicle story based off an (untranslated) anime?
Granted, I haven't watched it, but I understand what you mean about the main character's aliases.
But I can't really tell who's who (except Romeo, Juliet, Lancelot, and Montague), however I suppose that will all be clarified later.
Or at least it will be when I actually WATCH the anime.
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*P.S.-Sorry to all those authors who don't like anon reviews. Due to unreliable Contact info, I cannot get my own account here.

When did you have the time to write this? Probably late at night, eating the evil chocolate Easter Bunny...

This chapter is a little more...fluffy, like jet puff.

That was fast... good chapter.

It wasn't totally unexpected that Nokama was a Capulet.

Gah... long chapters!

This is really interesting so far! Kinda weird how Nokama likes dressing up as a boy, but I guess it'll be explained XD

And interesting about Vakama saving her...very interesting...so, Teridax is the archduke? Why does that fact please me so much? XD

Keep writing! This is real neat!

It's an... interest storyline, to say the least, but right now I'm kind of confused. You introduce several characters without much description and it's easy to loose track of who's who. A little more description, a little more information, and you should be good.

You probably could have cut this in half... and made it less like the anime. And the whole Nokama/Aka thing is confusing.