I had been meaning to read the old version for some time, but never got around to it. Oh well, can't worry about it now. So far it looks interesting. I say one typo where there word "bad" was supposed to be "bag" but other than that, it was well done.

I look forward to seeing more of this.

Wo :D :D :D

Hahaha you do have a unique presence in your writing, all the "weirdness", as you say. Honestly I think it did need to be toned down, I was always confused with each new chapter of this fic, but I'm very glad it's still kicking shins and butts. I can't wait to read this ...again. XD GO YOU!

I like it so far. It's fairly well written. One of the things that I really liked was the fact that you could make an entire chapter out of him getting out of the car, and headin ginto the building. But that brings something to mind. Why insert things like cars into Redwall? does it just make it more interesting or is it because you couldn't come up with a better mode of transportation? I'd like to know and see more of this. It's good even if it's rewritten.

Interesting. Please continue.