This is pretty great! Sounds just like what Larry would do when he writes the book, haha. XD

Poor poor Larry (or should I say Laurice), "Franzy" is really going to hurt him...

That was glorious.

I loved it! That made me laugh so hard~ :)

Please Ignore my other review... I hadn't finished TnT when I wrote that...

I really like It!

Ah, *wipes tear from eye*. That, my friend, is genius. Quite literally made me laugh out loud and get strange looks from people in the room. *adds signature to fan list*

Wait... Franziska and Edgeworth as SIBLINGS?!?!?!?!

But I like it, especially how it ended. Poor Larry.

I've always wondered what Phoenix and Edgeworth's reactions to "Franzy's Whippity Whip Trip" would be. (I think of the book like that, too.) You did a good job of portraying what I would guess would be their reactions. There are, however, some typos that disrupt the story a bit-like some missing periods, and such. But it's still hilarious-I loved how Edgeworth started getting on Larry about the sexual innuendo (my god, Larry, in a children's book?). What would've made the story even better, in my opinion, would be either putting Franziska's reaction in or the contents of the book. That's just me, though. Great job, except for some missing punctuation and awkward sentences here and there. 9/10.