Any particular reason why you named Leithian Leithian? You should be aware that that means Release, I think... *scrunches head up to think* ya...

Interesting story, though! Perhaps you should proofread a little more carefully next time though... a couple spelling/grammar mistakes did slip past.

I think I read it over at the MC Yahoo group before...but hadn't reviewed it there.

Poor Legolas. And poor Leithian.

Cal