Aw...I really liked this. I love the thought of Martha and the TARDIS forming that connection in 1913. I would love to see more along this line--maybe something about how much they miss each other after the 1969 thing? Only one thing though--I was never quite 'hearing' the TARDIS's voice. Something about it just didn't flow for me. At times she's very proper, but then there will be an informal thing thrown in. But other than that, it was wonderful. Like I said--I want to see more! Keep up the great work!