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Reviews for: Roma: the Shadow that crosses the Moon
Tama Saga
2008-03-26 . chapter 1
How fun is a story really when Ranma isn't kicking ass?

My thoughts are that someone from Ranma should be kicking ass in this chapter.

Because I'm really beginning to hate those stories where Ranma is dropped into a hotpot and he starts drowning instead of jumping out. Sure, some call it serious and good...I call it a lousy 'this isn't Ranma' story.

That said, it's well-written...but seeing a weak Ranma isn't my cup o' tea.
sandcrawlr
2008-03-26 . chapter 1
Different. Not really a whole lot to go on, but I'd be willing to read a bit more ;)
Aki Iokua
2008-03-26 . chapter 1
I'm thinking...a scene from a movie?

That's the feeling I'm getting from this, a scene right from the beggining of an action flick where the hero and the audience have absolutely no idea what the bloody heck is happening. Good job.
Crystalstorm
2008-03-25 . chapter 1
This sounds like it will be a good fic to read and I look foward to reading the next chapter. Ja.
Rose1948
2008-03-25 . chapter 1
Weird. Akane seems MOST un-Akane-like. Still, I'm curious, so I'll keep watch.
Tyler
2008-03-25 . chapter 1
Not bad so far. Some spelling and grammar errors, but still readable. The story content is pretty good and I can honestly say I'm looking forward to finding out what's going on and what will happen next.
Wonderbee31
2008-03-25 . chapter 1
Interesting start here, and looks like things are going to be rocking. It's really good to see a competent Akane here, and to see how she might be able to handle things along with Ranma.
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