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| Tama Saga 2008-03-26 ch 1,  | abuseHow fun is a story really when Ranma isn't kicking ass? My thoughts are that someone from Ranma should be kicking ass in this chapter. Because I'm really beginning to hate those stories where Ranma is dropped into a hotpot and he starts drowning instead of jumping out. Sure, some call it serious and good...I call it a lousy 'this isn't Ranma' story. That said, it's well-written...but seeing a weak Ranma isn't my cup o' tea. |
| sandcrawlr 2008-03-26 ch 1, | abuseDifferent. Not really a whole lot to go on, but I'd be willing to read a bit more ;) |
| Aki Iokua 2008-03-26 ch 1, | abuseI'm thinking...a scene from a movie? That's the feeling I'm getting from this, a scene right from the beggining of an action flick where the hero and the audience have absolutely no idea what the bloody heck is happening. Good job. |
| Crystalstorm 2008-03-25 ch 1, | abuseThis sounds like it will be a good fic to read and I look foward to reading the next chapter. Ja. |
| Rose1948 2008-03-25 ch 1, | abuseWeird. Akane seems MOST un-Akane-like. Still, I'm curious, so I'll keep watch. |
| Tyler 2008-03-25 ch 1, anon. | abuseNot bad so far. Some spelling and grammar errors, but still readable. The story content is pretty good and I can honestly say I'm looking forward to finding out what's going on and what will happen next. |
| Wonderbee31 2008-03-25 ch 1, | abuseInteresting start here, and looks like things are going to be rocking. It's really good to see a competent Akane here, and to see how she might be able to handle things along with Ranma. |