i lol'd

hip

normally i don't like rap but this was awesome

what can i say but i was laughing the whole way through. it was brilliant... though i think the person behind me nearly fell over... ah well... was worth it! keep up the good work... must read more silly raps...

Read the review for the poem above. I say the same here.
ARNOLD!

~Wondercheese~

Great Story mate.
Get another Chapter coming!

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~Dan

Nice Job! I like, I do!

wikid m8!
i love it!
wel done!
jos wood

1 word awesome!

kepp doing stuff like this,pulease!
thank you.

I like this lol. Pretty neat

Hahaha! Great! It rocks!

"Notorious B.I.G. Face" and "Slim Abey"? Very clever! There is no way I could have thought of that! You should write another one!

lol, I like it!

Oddworld + Slim Shady = cool songfics
Very good. ^___^

I love this rap its soo cool write another plzzzzzz