keep it coming!@ more more more

YAy. Another chapter. So a blind Van and a pervert Hitomi. Now that IS different. And how straight forward of Amano. I dont know if it is just me. But I do NOT like Amano or his twin counterpart Allen, or Merle.haha.
Can you guess I get annoyed easily.

Any way. Iliked the chapter. I think your doing better. But in the summary I think you forgot some words..i for got where but I think it was like a 'the' or something. So keep it up and Ill try to help as much as possible.
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Oh, you updated. Nice.
This chapter was just a prelude to better events so it wasn't anything special, but I did like the detail about Hitomi dreaming about Van even since she was a child.

This was a good chapter. A good way for Van and Hitomi to meet. But how was Van able to slay the dragon if he's blind? Oh.. wait.. hearing. Ha, I was right. Hitomi was the fortune teller. Are you going to have this story follow the series? Or is it going to be different? I'll be looking forward to the next update, keep up the good work.

I do like it. Very much so. Though you should think about a Beta. A beta would make it flow better. And would help the little spelling errors here and there.
Keep it up though I would love to see what happens next.
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Interesting start... I'm having an urge to strangle Van's advisers though. Imbeciles. He'll show them!

Please continue!

A blind Van? Were those advisors or whatever wanting to get Van killed by the dragon? Is Hitomi the Fortune teller that's going to be looking out for him?

Oh please update soon! This is a good start.

please continue!

well it seem interesting continue i'm in.