Don't stop now it's just getting interessting

OH NO MY POOR DRACO *sniff sniff*

I REALLY love it so far.

it just seems that you have the inspiration and the drive, but not the patience and care to pull it through and go over, double-check the spelling;P but you really should. take writing a story not as a way to just get it out of your head and stay up a bit later, but as something you enjoy most of all and charish. you have to a perfectionist, i know i'm not, so trust me when i say it's one of those things that helps you write better;P

the idea is great, but you have to nourish it a bit, grow it over with details and fully-blead emotions of the characters. that way it will be clearer to the reader what exactly you are pointing at and the meaning of the plot.

i liked the taste of this story, i actually rarely do nowadays when everybody seems to write what someone has written before, but this has something in it, it might be your own unique writing identity or the story-teller's voice. i think you really do have potential, but you have to work on it. we all do and we all have heard things like this countless times;P

That was INCREDIBLE! You have GOT to update this story and SOON! I have got to know what happens next!

T_T Need more! Write more! Right now!
~Thura Huodae

poor draco :( this is a a really sad but good story so far update soon!

I am definitly curious about what Draco wrote in the letters, other than him being in love with Harry... I look forward to the next chapter. Good start.