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WhenTheBloodMoonDies
2009-11-23 . chapter 22
WHAT! No more?!?!?!? D: (well right now.) I've read the 3rd fic then this one,
Now I'm going to read the 1st and 2nd, sorry about not reviewing for the last fic.
I loved it! :D
Your an amazing author,
These are some of the best fic's I've read in a long time.
Please continue them, I can't wait to find out what happens!
GreenieChan
2009-11-03 . chapter 22
Okey... I loved all fics of this story so far, but this became my favorite. I love Destin, but while reading this I started to like Kira more and more and now I don't know which one I like more :D
When I started reading this I had to read it through at once and couldn't stop even though it was 2 AM ^__^

Can't wait for the final chapter(s?)! I wanted Kira and Jake to end up together but I really don't have an idea what you're gonna do about the Wataru baby...? Will Jake just become his/her father or will something happen to the unborn baby? That would bring some action and drama in the fic...

Anyway it's gonna be, can't wait to read it when you continue!!
evil-sami-poo
2009-10-24 . chapter 22
This is really. I like how each story creates such different characters... finish this soon neh?
DarkestFlameUchiha
2009-10-04 . chapter 22
Gya! I kill you! Sorry for not reviewing to any of the other chapters, but since I just found your series, I couldn't help but find myself ridiculously anxious to get to the end. And then when I realized that this wasn't completed, I was just about ready to kill myself. I NEED MORE! Please update as soon as possible! It is necessary to my living! And seriously, Kira needs to freaking tell Jake that they had a kid together... and that he's pregnant with Wataru's kid... wow, that's a sucky plot line. Haha, sorry for the uber long review. But I've got to make up for the lack of reviewing before, right? ^^ So yeah. As soon as possible, please!
HanaTenshiHimeko
2009-08-15 . chapter 22
*sobs* WAH!! I read all the stories and finally leading up to here... *sobs her guts out* FINALLY!! YES!! He confessed his love!! Update son!! Because I think I'll die if you don't!! ToT
tocool4ice
2009-08-02 . chapter 22
awsome story it's to bad u havent updated in awhile
alex
2009-07-28 . chapter 22
i've written so many times to you
so sso many times
and i will ask u again
soo...why haven't u updated...
i mean i would understand if u had a life crisis or something...
but...
please please please update soon!
my life will not be complete if u don't...lol...
sasukegirl90210
2009-07-08 . chapter 22
OMG i love how this is turning out!!
keep up the good work this is EPIC!! ^.^ <3
alex
2009-06-16 . chapter 1
can u please hurry up with updating please!
this is one of my favorite fics
and u taking long is not cool
please please please update soon!
Triops Master
2009-05-26 . chapter 22
Finally we get to the confession. And then I'm guessing for some slight drama and then a happy scene, before Jake meets Junry right?
SolitaryLightning
2009-04-29 . chapter 22
I read your stories: Looking In, Always You, Lights & Sounds and finally Far and Away at one go yesterday. Love them.

Anyway, do you realised you actually mistakenly typed Destin name instead of Kira in one of the chapters? I noticed it and I thought I read it wrong. ^^ Anyway, just informing. It was when Kira was in the dream with Kyuubi.

Since this whole story is about Kira only, I'll just review based on his side of the story.

Well, when you first gave the choices of whom Kira should end up with, I honestly don't know. Sorry to say this but one thing for sure I didn't really like Jake's character from the beginning. So, if I were to choose, I don't mind it to be anyone but him. I was hoping it to be just a one night stand but it didn't. I don't really like his character. but, I can't do anything now that kira is so in love with him. That's my honest opinion when I was reading the story.

I'm wondering when Kira's going to tell Jake about their child. I think Kira just needed to show him and he'll know it's his. 'How' is the only issue Kira need to think about. I mean he'll have to explain about the genes thing. I thought he would have when he told Jake about Kyuubi but he didn't. Guess it won't be easy, huh?

I feel very sorry for Kira for having this kinda life. I mean, in a way, it's kinda like Sasu & Naru's life. Sasu and Naru's life were full of conflicts but there weren't anyone in between to interfere. Mostly are people there to help them. That is not how it is in Kira's case. Well, there are people who he can turn to but now he's pregnant with Wataru's child. It would've been better if he's not. He's having problem by problem arise. Even though I don't think Jake would mind, it's like Kira's life is meant to be so hard. I hope Jake don't mind.

Well, I still love the story. And even though I don't like Jake, I hope everything will be good between Jake and Kira. Kira deserve that much after all the things thaht happen in his life. Hope to hear updates from you soon.
XxXFading-With-TimeXxX
2009-04-28 . chapter 22
aw im soo happy Kira's with Jake again!! I love love love them together. And i love jake, but this is so good! great job
Diddlkid
2009-04-24 . chapter 22
wow this is turning out brillant.
congratulations on not going overboard on the emotional moments.

Is Kira ever going to tell Jake about Junry?

can't wait for your update!

Bex
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KyuubiMeiHime
2009-04-18 . chapter 22
YAy!

Its really a good progress for the two..^^

U know, i like the way u create the scenes in this chapter-actually, every chapter u've made-

And im looking forward to the next chapter coz u said Kira will reveal ALL!
AkatsukixXxProdigy
2009-04-17 . chapter 22
Yay! great chapter i loved it! lol sorry for yelling at you for the whole kira being pregnant thing. and you're right, it would be horrible if kira ended up with wataru now cuz jake would be crushed again and probably commit suicide. and we dont want that!
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