You've updated! Yay! *does happy dance* Sorry I've been absent for so long, but it looks like now things are starting to heat up. Love it, can't wait for an update!

Hmm, some interesting developments in this chapter. I like Adrian and I'm looking forward to seeing where all this is leading. Keep going :)

Yeah, it is a bit choppy, but I liked it just the same. And I already like Adrian. ;P And I liked how you added a section for just Ethan . . . he doesn't get enough screentime, IMAO.

All in all a pretty good chapter. Can't wait to see what happens next. =D

Ryan Brooklyn

I just started reading this story; it's really good! I think you're doing a fine job with the dialogue- you keep the recognizable characters in character, and the dialogue of your own characters is readable as well. I look forward to reading more!

warren would've graduated already, him being a sophmore when the movie was out and everything :I
i thought i'd tell you, even if you already knew, for just in case. when the information's wrong in a story it just tends to rub me the wrong way.
i hope this doesnt come out the wrong way, like condescendingly. but whatever.
good job so far :]]

Nice twist with CJ and Elise's backstories, particularly in Elise's case - that was definitely unexpected. That makes her rather a hypocrit, but I imagine she doesn't see it that way.

And don't worry, you're doing a great job with all the dialogue :)

Loved the bit about "The fact that he agreed with Lash on something disturbed Warren greatly" :D

Hmm, looks like Thrift is Up To Something...

So why did elise break up with warren?,hope to read more soon...;)

This is really good. I like Claire as a teacher, as well as her interactions with her students. :P

~Dani

Oh WOW! What a way to end a chapter! Quick! Get another one up so I can see what happens! XD

These past two chapters were pretty good, although I did have to read them in somewhat of a hurry. But I did like them. I'm interested to see where you're going to take this. Keep up the good work! =D

Great chapter. I liked how Claire read Speed the riot act and the bit about the 'retirement options' for villainy.

I feel sorry for her, it really looks like she's championing a lost cause with Lash, Speed & Penny. And on top of that she has to visit all those parents - I can't imagine they'll be too welcoming when she arrives on their doorsteps. I have to wonder how Thrift expects it's going to help the situation.

Hello, I'm finally back!

I like this story so far, it's got a lot of good potential, and I'm glad nobody's trying to get together with Warren. *hugs him* Claire's an interesting character, although I'd like to see her developed further.

-Miir

Nice chapter. Poor Claire - Elise really needs to get over herself.
I'm interested to see what the Principal is going to say to her (did he know about her parents?), and also how Speed is going to get himself out of the cliffhanger question.

I'm really enjoying your story so far and I hope you continue it but there is one thing I'm having trouble with. I find it hard to believe that students would be allowed to show that much disrespect to a teacher and that a teacher would take it. It's the one thing that takes me out of the story so I thought I'd mention it. Other than that, I think you are doing a terrific job.

Lash's subtle character development if very refreshing, to say the least. Compared to other Lash/OC fics, I applaud your story for not throwing the two together and not having either one of them immediately latch on to the other. Keep up the good work and I hope you update more frequently!

P.S. Kudos to the advice against using the same word twice! Variety is much better!