This is filed under the wrong fandom.
Please remove from 'Gossip'.
Thanks.

This is a very good story. But you should get a beta reader to check it over for you. And also double space. i can't even read right when its all together. And last don't make you paragraphs long, you are trying to make a story, not an essay.

Camille

why is this in the "gossip" category?