This is quite wow-worthy. You have a great writing style- good grasp of grammar and extensive vocabulary. You've handled Jarod's action sequences and the slower conversational moments equally well too. I was really getting into your characterization of Miss Parker :D The whole burning of Lyle's authorization papers and a lot of the things she says fall right in with my mental take on her. ^_^ This was really really fun to read and if you decide to continue, I will be a-waiting in the wings for your updates!

Awesome story. I love the way the characters are portrayed, every one of them seems very real and Debbie's transformation into Deb the Teenage Girl is very amusing. Overall, though, the story strikes a chord of dreadful possibility of something that seems terribly possible in light of the universe, and I love it for that. Maybe it's a bit sadistic of me, but I love it when the Centre throws unsurmountable challenges at him. Of course, I love it when he finally manages to get through it, too. It doesn't seem likely that you'll continue this after so much time, but if you ever do, I'll definitely follow it through.

PLEASE update this totally awesome, fantastic, bestwritten-story-ever fanfic! It is torture to not finish this! (So this was begging and appealing to your consience - I am crossing my fingers that something will help :)!

Beautiful fanfiction, I see that is stopped by a little, I hope for an update, it is a pity not to be continued.

Do you know what a brilliant story you have here? Please update it someday...

This is most probably the best fanfic that I have ever read!! And I read a lot:)! Best story, best writing style, best everything! Please update soon!! Can't wait for the next chapter(s)!

I love the story so far; can't wait to find out what happens. Please update soon.

Please update soon. I've been following your story for a while now, and I'm dying to know what happens.

Hi that was a good chapter and can't wait for the next chapter. Poor Broots I fell for him now that Debbie is a teen.

Sad, when we have to hope a sick project like Animus suceeds- its going to be so weird with Jarod not remebering. Poor Broots- teenagers can be a handful.

Once again, I am really enjoying this story. The characters are still in line with what is expected (and you've added a nice dimension to "Deb" *g*). I'm not sure which part I liked the best, it's a toss up between the section on MP and the section on Broots; both had some great stuff in them. Keep up the good work and thanks for posting!

Really great fic! Can't wait for the next chapter. I hope Jarod gets his memory back soon. Hopefully MP and Sydney will help him escape!

It took me awhile to catch up - but it was worth it. I'm really enjoying your writing. The plot is so taut and well woven that it's really difficult to stop reading (even when the clock on the wall says it's time to do so). I have to admit, though, my favorite thing about this story is the way you've gotten into the character's heads. You are showing their thoughts/emotions clearly with so little words - I'm in awe. Please continue.

Once again you have created a mesmerizing chapter. The emotions were so thick it was difficult NOT to feel Jarod's fear or Parker's helplessness and guilt. You did a marvelous job showing Jarod's memories eroding and his realization that it was happening.

"Jarod clung to the images that flashed across his mind without really knowing why.The past did not matter. The future did not matter. All that mattered was clinging to these strange, vaporous images. But it was all in vain. The more he tried to hold on, the faster the sensations slipped away..."

Loved it. Please continue.

This is the best thing I have read in a long time. It is incredibly well written and the plot is tight and moves along at a great pace. The characters are so perfect you should have been writing for the show. You have captured the complex emotions wonderfully and it is all very credible. I love that Parker isn't too soft, but at the same time she is feeling all the effects of this. She is a far more complex character than she is given credit for noramlly and you have nailed that brilliantly.

I cannot wait until this is updated. Brilliant!