How did the boy know his name?

Confusing enough...

And how can Voldemort not know that Harry is one of those who were sent to kill Voldemort and several Death Eaters?

How can Voldemort not notice that Harry has seen magic of the Creed, which is more advanced than magic studied in Hogwarts, and probably more advanced than magic studied by Voldemort?

How can Voldemort not hear that people from the USA were invited to fight against him?

Voldemort doesn't have good spies, it seems...

And I don't know what is going on about Professor Severus Snape, and what side he fights for. I would prefer him to be against Voldemort, even if Severus doesn't like Light (rejecting dark magic is a limitation; never say never; the world isn't black and white, there always is gray; etc), or Ministry (corrupt bureaucracy), or Britain (prejudiced society).

I am enjoying this story but feel I must make an important criticism.

Swearing in a story can improve it. However the swearing in this chapter goes over the top and actually spoils the story. Anger is quite proper but the swearing makes Harry seem like a child or incapable of proper cohesive thought and, more importantly speech. The story is a good one but I suggest less swearing will make it better.

Bob

wow great story even better if you finnish it :D

Hmm could be a dream? And lol Harry feels like dresden getting into insane amounts of trouble, people who have power that want him to join yet on the wrong side and all those ladies yet no relationships XD

So this isn't a aliss/harry anymore? Since for some reason she went back to thomas? Hmm

I still dont know his pairings i hope its gray

...slightly

I like the story. Really. Especially the way you make Harry and the Trio interact. But your OC really annoys me to no end. She turns up and immediately Harry likes her. And she transfered from America.

Seriously? No matter how good it was up until there, by putting an exchange student into it you kind of gave your story the final blow yourself. There are very, very, very few plots that allow such a breach of cannon and even fewer authors that really manage to pull it off. I don't know if you are one of "those" authors but I think your story is not one of "those" stories, sorry.

It seems a lot like you just put her there to get Harry the perfect girlfriend.

Godd story the dialouge is a little weird at times and it seems like all the charactors speak in the same way, but it stopped hAppening as much has the story went on. I'm quite interested in the pairing now you've tAlked about the pairing a lot but in the 45 actual chapters there hasn't been a single mention of harrys love intrest other then Alice or possibly Jen is what I thought at first. There are a few spelling errors that I noticed you do quite a lot. You put out where there should be our. As well as a few tense errors but over all you've done a good job.

Looking forward to the next chapter.

die grimmig Maher

I realize you probably like allis or whatever her name is and I’m guessing when you came up with this story you wanted her to be an important part of it you probably like most fanfic authors just injected yourself into the story in the form of your OC but I have to say she is awful. She has to be the worst OC I have ever read. Seriously her presence alone is dragging a fairly decent story into the dumpster. every time she comes up I’m either annoyed or I just skip that section. The only reason I’m even still reading is because I like this story very much and I keep hoping her section in the story won’t be too long so I can just skip those parts, but it’s getting harder and harder to just ignore her. She’s not a very developed or even likeable OC there is no real chemistry with her and Harry. I as a reader can’t understand why he even wants to be near her it just doesn’t work the whole thing is too forced. I know you prob like your OC and won’t remove her ( sadly) but could you at least either write her better or limit her involvement in the story?

Jennifer Anne Black?

Anne is a muggle name, and as for Jennifer...well, notice that every child in the Black family has a STAR name. I'm just saying...

this chapter ended great

Evil..you are SO verry evil for just stopping the story here..i mean, we don't even know who the little boy is! grr..so please please please updatee..?

Just quickly wanted to ask why harry used a spell with an infinite symbol that was taught by one of the strongest wizards in the world, and yet isn't able to beat a complete unknown?

So who is the mystery boy?

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