 Paris in December 2009-10-11 . chapter 3This story is amazing. I've always had a fondness for Sora, and this is a story I can really believe might have happened. Very true to everyone's character. |
 SGA-SAF 2009-09-25 . chapter 3this was a great read! I always thought they could have done more with this character, glad you decided to share this! :D |
 Lone-ranger1 2009-07-03 . chapter 3while this is more than a year late, i always review things i like. So here it is
I'm impressed. Sora always intrigued me and it sucks that her storyline pretty much vanished off the rader (I'm convinced Bates tossed her off a pier before the Siege... Although it was confirmed that there was an unfilmed scene where Sora gets traded back to the Genii in exchange for those nukes they get in the Siege :P)
I also admit i like most fics that include her and write her decently well. i've given thought to writing something about her but you've basically written almost exactly what i would have thought of (well... except the war and peace thing, i never did get all the way through before passing out)
the whole thing about fanaticism and the tie in to War and Peace was beautiful (even though i haven't finished reading it :P ). Really well thought out and i heartily enjoyed it :D
I'll make an effort to read more of your stuff now, (I'll admit this was the one that intrigued me the most, but i'll read something else tomorrow :P)
All the best, Sam. |
 cflat 2008-11-02 . chapter 2Just read this story again, and I still say it is the best Sora story I've read. I also think it would be interesting to see you do a sequel to this story, maybe set during season 4? |
 Eternal Density 2008-09-10 . chapter 3that was a great story, particularly because Sora was a primary character. good work! |
 Airam4u 2008-08-18 . chapter 1That was a brilliant story! Your characters were all extremely in tune (at least with what I recall from a few years ago). I appreciate your not rushing the story and giving it time to develop the situation and more importantly the characters. This is one of the better fics I've read in recent history. |
 Snowviper 2008-03-27 . chapter 3Good job! And it's great to see Sora get some credit, I hated it that her storyline got dropped. I have plans for including her in some stories myself in the future... |
 Frisco 2008-03-27 . chapter 3I really enjoyed this - the relationship between Sheppard and Sora, the look at who the Genii are and how they got that way, the distrust of Bates, the bits of canon interspersed throughout. Really well done. |
 Ditzyleo 2008-03-27 . chapter 3This was great! Truely. You wrote Sora so well- getting across her conflict and John's too. The relationship was built slowly and so believably. Had to keep reminding myself that this was only a ff! Well done |
 cflat 2008-03-26 . chapter 3Great story! I have to say that this is the best Sora story I've read yet! |
 faldo 2008-03-26 . chapter 3You're right about the unresolved Sora storyline. This was an excellent rounding of her story. Enjoyed it very much - thanks (and strangely Sheppard never even got hurt!!). |
 Jammeke 2008-03-26 . chapter 3I'm almost sad the story is over, but because it was such a good ending, I can live with it, I think. It was nice to see Sora didn't double-cross them, but wasn't too fond of them either. That was very believeable; it would have been weird had she trusted them completely. I liked the epilogue! And I am glad you resolved Sora's storyline, thank you for that!! |
 Jammeke 2008-03-26 . chapter 2I am really enjoying this story- even though I am supposed to be learning German words right now... ;) I think I am going to read the next chapter anyway. I like how Sora and Sheppard are starting to trust each other and she's started reading War and Peace, which is funny- but nice. I really like this perspective!! |
 Jammeke 2008-03-26 . chapter 1I love your idea for this story. I've always wondered what happened to Sora and I even tried to think of a story myself but I found that I couldn't do it. I like your version, with Sora's mixed up feelings. Everyone's in character and I really like how you portray Sheppard. I am going to read the second chapter now! |
 agent1332 2008-03-26 . chapter 3Interesting spin on what happened to Sora, and Ladon's reason for instigating the coup. I enjoyed this story.
Keep up the good work. |