Reviews for Prelude To Heartache

StrongatHeart 2008-09-23 ch 1,	abuseThis was really great too! I love how you included the final battle in here, I thought it was a really nice touch, and a great idea for bringing them together. You somehow combined three of my favorite qualities in a fic: angst, hotness, and teh sweet love. ;)
Tears-Of-Blood333 2008-08-16 ch 1,	abusei really liked it ^_^
Alliance Webb 2008-05-08 ch 1,	abuseI'm a huge fan of the pairing and have not yet read your other fic. I may just move my interested little toosh in that direction. The greatest review I have, however, is a basic brush up on editing technique and uses of certain words. Especially 'to' and 'too'. If you can replace the word with 'also', use 'too'. There are a few other things I would change. You sometimes switch point of view in the same paragraph (switching from what Draco would have thought to what Oliver would have thought) when typically you should seperate those into two paragraphs. Oh, and one thing I did notice (and you can blame word for this one, probably) 'definately' as opposed to 'defiantly'. Just edits that I would suggest to make this better.
DreamingLillies 2008-03-25 ch 1,	abuseomg! omg! omg! nice! that was awesome! it didn't suck at all!! 2 questions though: A, why did Oliver feel so dirty and unworthy?? B, what was he lying about? Okay some grammer, but hell who doesn't have mistakes? talk to ya soon! Jenna