*sniffles* omg! that is so sad! it made me cry! especialy the last part, so sad, yet so beautiful...excelent writing!

this is so sad! i dont want tooya to die! did he really die, btw? im new to AnC so i wouldnt know...

That was so sad... but nice. But really really sad... but nice. And so on. XD

awwww. . . darn you for making me cry. .. **sniffles** that was beautiful. Short, yes, but poetic and lovely.

I like this, but it's so damn sad. Good writing. -kit

OoOoOo...what a sad sad SAD fic. Loved it though! Good job!

Ouch! Beautiful,tender,heartrending,poignant and short. Love everlasting,total passion and surrender. Love complete,embracing and peaceful. Love forever,through time and space.Tender story,it touches one's heart and makes one cry.

Weeelll, it was sweet! Whatta about robi-Japanese name? But cute, never the less. Sad. Good. Short.

I really like your ideas in this fic! However.. there could have been so much more put into it (please don't hurt me). It's hard to get a sense of the pain each must be feeling at this moment. Maybe a little more description and character study would have helped? And their speech patterns are a bit off (I really can't see Tooya calling Aya "honey". _;;;; Just my thoughts. The fic shows great promise, though! Keep at it!

And now for my review...

! _ This story was very very nice. _ lol. My only complaint - Why the name Robin? I don't feel that it fit into the story nicely. ; Maybe just 'cause the names are so traditional Japanese and then... "Robin." o.o Other then that - YAY! HE'S DEAD! Ja! *Winks and blows a kiss* .

That was soo sad! You have good writing skills... keep it up _