Good shot! I liked it.

This would be a great ending to a story...and then the story (novel length, of course, haha) would describe how they overcame their differences to be who they are today...how to HIM, she bacame "only her"

I like your work. Keep smiling. :-)

Better to save one than none, I suppose. But was there no other choice?

Pretty okay, but the first sentence should have a comma before "and," as well as the third sentence.

But all in all, it's looks good.