I think chapter 4 is the same as chapter 3. Maybe it was an uploading error?

That... was quite the tetralogy. I'm a recently turned Tatsumi/Watari addict (YES - I JUST WATCHED YAMI NO MATSUEI - IKR, LATE MUCH, SELF), and this, is probably my first taste of this pairing...

and...

I can say many words, but I will sum it up into one reaction:

this fic is...

UNFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFF.

(which is kinda ironic, when you think of the fact that they *cough* haven't *cough* had *cough* sex)

However, what is UNFFFFFFFF about this fic is the right amount of angst/hurt/comfort/romance/drama that makes me people swoon and the wonderful, wonderful characterization and marvelous original plot (and characters!).

Of course, that was before I pulled off a classic Darth Vader "." when I saw the last update. In which it resulted in my dramatic crying-in-the-corner-why-does-my-life-suck-so-much act.

I wish you will update this - I get that even the original - as in, Yami no Matsuei is still on hiatus (if I am not mistaken) but that's why we have your fic :D

I hope you will consider to update your wonderful and breathtaking YnM fics again :)

Oh dear, it seems I am quite late to the party. And there haven't been any updates for three years, but I'm an eternal optimist that you'll be back to finish up someday!

I definitely read all of your YnM stories in one go instead of revising that English paper that's due tomorrow. They are just so fantastic and believable and well-characterized and well-written that I couldn't stop! And I think you've made me start shipping Tatsumi/Watari really, really hard. I was only a casual fan of it until I read your fics, and now it's pretty much the only thing I read. XD

I do hope you come back someday - this is too good of a story to leave it there! :)

I'm still waiting for more! I absolutely love your stories. I'm also a big fan of Tatsumi/Watari. Your stories are the best I've ever read! Write more please. *looking at you with big doe eyes*

It'll be interesting to see if Hisoka can reverse this hypnosis at all. I can't wait to see what happens next, so keep up the good work, OK? Dark Inu Fan

Still watching for an update. Please don't forget about us. :)

Oh, I was just /waiting/ for some sort of twist to happen! XD Nyah ha.

Well, I actually read your other YnM fics but I was too eager to read your other stories that I neglected to review them. X I swear I will later. And hopefully I keep that promise. *sighs*

I just recently re-read and re-watched YnM so I started to dabble around for fics and I somehow found yours and I must say that I am especially glad that I did. 3 Indeed, welcome to the insanity. XD Though I don't think that it is entirely a /bad/ thing.

Hrm, I think the only errors I see is that sometimes you miss words and I think once or twice you mixed up "you're" and "your" and "to" and "too" though that also might be in your other fics. o_0 But other than that, your writing is very clean.

And I love the fact that you actually have a plot other than 'getting the couple together' (though again this pertains to the predecessors of this fic) so it makes it much more interesting. D

I can't wait until Tsuzuki and Hisoka see what has happened to Watari and join up with Tatsumi (and possibly Oriya). *waits patiently for the next update*

This might be my first time reviewing one of your stories. Just know that I've been reading ALL of your YnM fics. I've given up reading any other fanfiction actually... It's just too hard to find something good. I've still got your fics though. Right? Just don't forget about us, your loyal fans/readers that are still waiting for this great series to update. It's bad enough we'll never get an ending to the YnM series, but I think I might be even more satisfied to have an ending to the awesome story you have here with my two favorite characters. Looking forward to the next update on this series! (Leaving this review for chapter one because I'm a bit lazy.) Have a good one. :)

Jazi, I'm a huge fan of every series you've created! Your portrayal of Tatsumi/Watari's relationship is astounding! I adore your characterizations and plots. Please keep writing as magnificently as you do!

*adoring reader*

Jamie

Oh my god XDD that is AMAZING

Yay! You're back! XD

I really liked this chapter, but I had a strange feeling of "disappointment" when Watari escaped from the strange-muraki-like-kidnapper so soon. I would have loved to have him playing some with Tari. 8D ...will he be back for him hmm? O.O

;*

ROFL! Oh, man, that's hilarious! Watari will NEVER live this one down. Poor Tatsumi - I think we're about to find out just how red the shadow master can turn.

XD Poor Oriya. He's just an anti-hero, not a bad guy. Tatsumi Seiichiro jumps to conclusions! Oh, I've got to know how this turns out! Poor Tari-chan. Please update, Jazie. You're my favorite TatWat author!

Too lazy to sign in.

ANYWAYS.

Poor Oriya. He's my fav after Watari. Now he's gonna get attacked again.

"ORIYA MIBU!"

"IT WASN'T ME! I'M JUST AS SUPRISED AS YOU ARE! "

And my imagination RUNS AWAY!

I wasn't too sold on this chapter (it seemed a bit rushed, and turning Watari into a submissive sexual servant was a bit of... it's a bit of a stretch to me). However, you have proven yourself to be a very good storyteller and am quite excited about what you'll do to this series :)

Looking forward to the next chapter soon :)