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| Flash Foreward 2008-08-20 ch 1, | abuseThis is beautiful. Just...so wonderful. You get into Mal's thoughts, his cause, perfectly. And the last line is just plain brilliance (particularly the emphasis). Wonderful work! |
| maggierg09 2008-03-25 ch 1, | abuseOh, I like this. You explain Mal's POV well and you're staying completely in character. This makes me want to watch that scene again. Mal has so much more depth than the character usually shows and you get at his inner workings nicely. |