that was good keep it up

Good one

LOL

I think I like the first version more

funny and cute ... silly silly Bella nad her dreams.. LOL ... i liked them both but I like the 2nd version thebest :)

oh. i wonder how bella's gonna explain that

another dream? but with apistol this time right?

that was funny you caught me off guard when charlie came and thne when I found out she was dreaming. lol Edward has her in a corner he's going to make her tell him.

Loved this one as well! Very well done! :)

DisneyVampire . .

VV

i love this story it is so funny do one from charlies pov

Hi,

I think that you are an amazing writer, and I loved both versions.

I have to say, I kind of like the second one a smidge better.

JSYK, I am going to send a link to this to my friends so they can read it 2!

Yay!

Mrs. Jasper Hale

wow. I havent even read this book yet, but that was intense. I mean ive read twilight, new moon, and im going to starts eclipse tonight. I dont think I should spoil anything else, but boy did that scare me at first! Very good part!

Loved both versions!

um...ok. that was kinda weird. i liked it but... ya...

good, gonna read the next chapter...

Oh my HAHAAH! That was hilarious D

Love Edward and Charlie..!