Reviews for A Strange Dream

L.A.H.H.
2008-05-08
ch 1,

abuseNo, this was really good. You should continue it, then I can tell my friend who loves LOTR snd Belgariad about this great crossover I found and get lots of brownie points with her!

Soului
2008-03-27
ch 1,

abuseI didn't think it was confusing at all. Yes you used a lot of plot elements with the poem, and events from different fandoms, but you blended them nicely. The italics and underlining kept things from getting too confusing and the poem stood out because it was centered. All in all, the literary structure of this piece is good, you evoked strong emotional respose, your imagery was fantasic, and you did a wonderful job of drawing parellels between the stories. I really like that line of Aragorn's mother's. It has a lot of depth and is very profound. Maybe you could find a way to work it in?

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