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Reviews For: Renting in New York City

bookworm45
2008-06-02
ch 1,
abuseM! Love, Marriage, Danny with a baby carriage? *squee*
marialisa
2008-03-27
ch 1,
abuseCute and fluffy. Loved it ;)
Elja
2008-03-26
ch 1,
abuseLoved this- it was really sweet :)
A.Boleyn
2008-03-26
ch 1,
abuseYou are my HERO! :D I loved this, it was warm and snuggly and sweet and I couldn't have asked for better fluff. This is precisely what the doctor ordered! You make the everyday moments so vivid, it got me smiling and giggly now for sure. Fabulous, per usual, I am going to re-read befor bed and hopefully have very fluffy dreams!
katydid13
2008-03-26
ch 1,
abuseCute!
ReJo
2008-03-25
ch 1,
abuseCute story
notesofwimsey
2008-03-25
ch 1,
abuseI really think people should stop listening when Carmine gives interviews - he seems to delight in playing all sides off each other!

That being said, I think this was a lovely fluffy piece that still managed to stay well in character for both of them - I like that the conversations were normal and not "elevated" - that he made a joke of the asking but not of the Question ("You know a New Yorker loves you ...") and that she didn't squeal and say yes right away.

Very nice.
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