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| glozinga 2008-04-21 ch 1, | abuseGreat beginning! Zero drssing up as a werewolf, I can imagine that!! It'll look very funny and adorably cute! Continue and update! ~Glozinga~ |
| FirestormAngelBlaze 2008-03-28 ch 1, | abuseChibi Zero, huh? WAH, how kawai...:sinks into fangirly squeals: please do continue 'cuz i'd love to see what happens next! you have a very mature style here, your character portrayal is believable and realistic. the way you subtly describe Yuuki's innocence and Zero's recent scars...it's great! Ja Ne! :D :) FirestormAngelBlaze |
| Sora'sDawningTwilight 2008-03-26 ch 1, | abuseThis was really nice. And un-cute huh? Someone's a Ranma fan! Either that or that was an interesting coincidence lol. Poor Zero. And omg! You said baka! (I use that word all the time)And what Pairing do you prefer, I can't really tell. |
| YenGirl 2008-03-26 ch 1, | abuseTHIS IS GOOD! I'm so glad you uploaded this. I love ZeroYuuki too and yours is well-written, with the characters down pat. I like how you hinted at Zero's past because at this point, Yuuki doesn't know it yet, so well done. And satisfyingly long as well. I look forward to Chapter 2! |