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| hippogriff-tamer 2008-03-30 ch 2,  | abuselol..poor Corny..I like the "Lily paused and then turned her attention to Corny. “Daddy, I’m bored.” “Really?” he asked in feigned surprise. “I’m Daddy. Nice to meet you, bored. Are you still bored? ‘Cause I’m still Daddy.” Lily laughed. “You’re silly, Daddy.” My mom would do that.. and at the end "How was the ride" "Peachy" hehehe...very cute story I really enjoyed it! |
| :) 2008-03-28 ch 1, anon. | abuseHahaha! I love the part about Mr. Sniffles! |
| tadsgirl 2008-03-28 ch 2, | abuseYou have captured Car travel like no other. I remember trips like this when I was a kid. Somehow I knew there would be carsickness involved! Fantastic Job! |
| hushlovehush 2008-03-27 ch 2, | abuseHee hee, so cutes! Though I really would love to see a chapter with the kids visiting Velma... :o) |
| Bonanza and AMC Addict 2008-03-27 ch 2, | abuseAgain, Corny was absoulutely incredible. Almost sorry it's over. Perhaps you should write another Collins family fic. You seem to be rather good at it. Awesome. But...you didn't tell us what Corny's middle name is! *Pouts.* Oh well...some things are better left usaid, I guess... :0) |
| Bonanza and AMC Addict 2008-03-27 ch 1, | abuseOh my God...it was hillarious! Corny was just...oh, my God...poor fella. Very cool. The whole ending bit was the best part. "Can it, Seabiscuit." LOL! Amazing! |
| Courvoisier 2008-03-26 ch 2, | abuseTHAT WAS AMAZING! I loved it, you made me stop crying and laugh for the first time in two days! GREAT job! :) I loved it! |
| writergirl2003 2008-03-26 ch 2, | abuseHehe, I loved this. It was way cute, and I hope you decide to write more. This was so great, and cute. |
| writergirl2003 2008-03-26 ch 1, | abuseHaha, very cute! Can't wait to read this second chapter, this was really entertaining. |
| MidnightCowboy 2008-03-26 ch 2, | abuseWow! That was great! It's the way I imagine every family's road trip goes! Oh, and I think that Doris Day and Rock Hudson were just friends, if you catch my drift... Anyway, it was great! |
| hushlovehush 2008-03-26 ch 1, | abuseThis is too cute! Can't wait for chapter 2! |
| hippogriff-tamer 2008-03-26 ch 1, | abusethat so reminds me of past summer vacations..I understand Corny getting frustrated with his kids and Amber trying to keep eerything smooth...is there gonna be somethig with Brenda since you mentioned her?? I'll be a good girl and wait to see...can't wait to see what you have in store next! |
| H6p8gv 2008-03-26 ch 1, | abuseThis is great I can't wait to find out what happens next. |
| Spooony 2008-03-26 ch 1, | abuseOh, I loved this! I love Corny as the stressed father. :) And the AmberCorny was delectable! When Amber came out of the bathroom, she found her two children swaying dangerously on her husband’s back, howling with laughter as he made horse noises. He paused as he noticed her, the laugh dying in his throat. The two children slid off of his back, jumping into bed. “Hi, sweetie,” Corny said, clearing his throat and straightening his shirt. “Can it, Seabiscuit.” :D Can't wait for the next one. |
| tadsgirl 2008-03-26 ch 1, | abuseOh my Lord LC that was Brilliant! I loved the end but I didn't think you made Corny out to be mean, just the typical Dad on a roadtrip. I think all of us have see our Dads turn into this. ;-). Great Job with the timeline references. You did a marvelous job! |