 Kay8abc 2009-08-17 . chapter 3I can't wait to see what you have planned next.
-Kate |
 Kay8abc 2009-08-17 . chapter 1I was going to comment that this sounded like a book I read. Anyway on to the next chapter.
-Kate |
 Capt H.M Murdock 2009-01-12 . chapter 3This is an awsome story. keep up the great work and please update very very soon. |
 Vaxity 2008-04-12 . chapter 3i thought that was a good chapter...i like this story so far...
just please keep updating!
fanfics are like my drugs!
im really addicted!
and without completed stories i go nuts!
well i already am...but thats not the point!
please update! |
 hpfreak2008 2008-03-28 . chapter 3I'm loving this story, especially the language, it sounds cool and I can really picture it all in my head. I do have a suggestion though; sometimes when your character's are talking I get confused because u don't know who is saying what, maybe you could make that clearer somehow? |
 Dreaded Demon of Night 2008-03-28 . chapter 3Yay Miley and Lilly are together! Can't wait for the next chapter! |
 Truscott 2008-03-28 . chapter 3Great Chapter, can't wait for more :). |
 TwilightSpashley 2008-03-28 . chapter 3great chapter, lots of action. I love it |
 Bound Dragon 2008-03-28 . chapter 2Cool story update soon plz |
 TwilightSpashley 2008-03-27 . chapter 2great chapter, I love it |
 Truscott 2008-03-27 . chapter 2Awesome chapter, I loved the end. Can't wait for more :). |
 Dreaded Demon of Night 2008-03-27 . chapter 2I'm not overwhelmed with this chapter, it had action, emotion, and some liley in it so it was perfect! |
 lil-ying-fa 2008-03-26 . chapter 1intersesting chapter
hope u udpate soon |
 Truscott 2008-03-26 . chapter 1Really cool start, can't wait for more. |
 Dreaded Demon of Night 2008-03-26 . chapter 1I'm liking this a lot! You really need to update ASAP! |