Reviews for I Heard The Bathrooms Were Dirty

shydmpls 2008-07-20 ch 1, anon.	abuseNO, NO, No you must'nt write such things.NO, NO, NO, mother will get angry with you and you know what happens when mother gets angry. Also your sex in the stall sucks big time (great job/way to go).
The-Icon-Girl 2008-04-09 ch 1,	abuselaughs hysterically in a wow that wasn't really funny way but I'm laughing Yeah. That was awesome. I cannot BELIVE Kyle got drunk. And then had sex. With Stan. In a bathroom. At a party. Omg. Wow. Loved it!
... 2008-03-27 ch 1, anon.	abusePretty good oneshot. I wish it was longer, I feel like you're teasing me. D:
kyleisgod 2008-03-26 ch 1, anon.	abuseThis was a decent oneshot, but you didn't actually...You know...Follow through with the sex act. Personally I feel like if you're going to tease the reader with it and go into detail leading up to it as you did here, you should go all out and "show" the whole thing. That's just my personal feeling though. On the plus side, you had the characters pretty downpat. The ending was unexpected and amusing, and the opening line made me think of SNL. I assume the girl and guy in the other stall were Kenny and his girl, and Stan and Kyle being right next door is pretty kinky. Overall I approve of this fic.