Great story! I really liked it! I didn't realize that there were only three chapters until I had submitted my review, so I was unable to tell you then how much I enjoyed the story as a whole because they don't allow multiple reviews for the same chapter, so I'm doing so now. I love this story!

Great chapter! I really liked it!

Great chapter! Wonderful! I love Jack's insight about Sam! Brilliant!

Glad to see you added another chapter and it was good to read Jack's thoughts about Sam.

Yay! You wrote more! Thank you! :D

That's what I was talking about! Great job ;)
Light but effective. Pleasant surprise;

i like it the daniel pushing him was probs the only way it would work and it did get back to normal quickly in the show.
like the work keep the stories coming xx

This was really good! I thought maybe you'd have them cross the line, but liked the way it turned out.

"He wondered if he’d ever get around to telling her how hot she was when she went on one of those technobabble binges she loved so much."

Loved that line! I can't wait to see how they get their friendship/love back on line.
~Danielle

Just love how you wrapped this all up in the real episode. The comments he made to her, the *maybe he'd ask her to go fishing*, just everything. Great fic! It's really wonderful to get new Jack/Sam fic even years after the original episodes were on. You rock!

Now you have me wondering if their could possibly be more :) I would love to see them really get past this and of course for her to accept a fishing invitation :)

Oh yay!!

Poor Jack . . . off to read the next chapter!

He has a lot of making up to do to Sam, I only hoep she can forgive him ;)

wow, that was intense! i liked it a lot. i like very much how the converstaion develops and i think both sam and jack are very well characterized(is it this word?)so congrats for a good job! i really think this fic is calling for a sequel, maybe about the end of the episode?? i think it would be great!
good job!

**picks stomped-on heart up off the floor**

Great twist! Wow. I love how you had Sam say *more than I'm supposed to* here. Makes it even more meaningful when he says it back to her less than a year later. This would make a good first chapter in a longer story . . . hint . . . really. Maybe Jacks point of view during his Shades of Grey ep, then the *talk* afterward . . . I'm just sayin . . .

Great fic!