oi...i like the animation...

WOW! Such a great Yohji/Omi lemon! they're one of my favorite couples. Do you think you could mane an Aya/Ken lemon/ PLEASE!

I give you points for effectively written smut and not glossing over the pain aspect but...

i think it is a bad idea to sleep with yohji and not use a condom. just being realistic

o.O I used to think that OmixYouji fanfics were horror...I didn't like 'em before. But it's okay now. A friend recommended this fic to me and I thought it was so interesting...ohohoho...oh yes, I enjoyed it. But I do hope you improve on your spelling...no offense! But, anywho, I love this! v Yeah!

I totally agree with you. ) there just aren't enough yohji/omi fics out there. and I'm so grateful that you wrote this. _ happy happy me!

oh, I love this fic. Almost as much as your digimon fanfiction. It's a pity you don't find more of Yama & co on the net today, such a hottie... keep on writing it!

I love this fic. i keep coming back to it to read again. I think you should do a 'morning after' fic, too.

Very good story! This should have a sequel or second chapter!

Yes... now here's a couple I love! Good fic. It did have a plot at the beginning. Great job!

cute.. lemony.. and yes very pointless... but I liked it.. keep it up.. on any fandom you write on.

I thought it was interesting, nice to see them just fooling around and having fun, and no, I don't mean the sex ::g:: A "morning after" fic for this would be lovely ::hint hint::, but I respect your decision. Also, to whoever wrote that the "Seme come before the uke when using a slash", that's only in anime fandoms. It's not used in any other non anime slash fandoms out there, so I think the author can be "forgiven" for not using it. I know I was totally confused before I figured out what that meant ::g::

It was kinda odd how they alla sudden end up smooching like crazy, 'specially since Yohji was mad at him...But still cute, lemony bishounen goodness!

Decent? A decent Yohji and Omi Lemon? It was great! . Thank you!

Yaho! That was so cute! I really liked it, and that you shouldn't listen to those flamers which i read what they said and totally disagree. It seemed to flow fine and the grammer seemed decent enough for me, the spelling was really only you were missing a letter in a word nothing really major, it's not like people here are trying to write pulitzers if they were they wouldn't be writting fanfics but originals. On another note anyone with a basic comprehension the english language should be able to read your story. Also i've never really seen WK, but i still got a feel for these characters and liked it, and you wrote your lemon very well to point, also i really really like your digimon fics, Yeah for Kensuke & Daiken! Reviews are for constructive critisim, not destructive! What was more odd to me is that was the first flames i had ever seem on a fic for all the time i've been here, and a yaoi more specificly, you know we yaoi writers gotta stick together! So as an end to my rant, kepp writing cause for every flame there are 10 more people who like your fic, *eats the flames*I eat them for breakfast every morning and you should too! Ja!

Hey i like yohji x omi too :B tho omi's really a bit Ooc... *_* Kewl fic !