 haruko sohma 9/6/08 . chapter 1I knew that L was going to be the one to call Misa, but after reading the pervert line, I still gasped in surprise/relief XD For a while I was thinking that this was alternate universe since Misa was oblivious to the whole Kira case, but... yeah. That last line kinda gave me chills, but at the same time, it was very comforting. This was a really unique story idea, and I'm glad you wrote it |
 Meng-4-2 5/22/08 . chapter 1Very sweet fanfic. |
 KittenHatake 3/30/08 . chapter 1Sad and scary. Absolute love! |
 psych11 3/28/08 . chapter 1Aw, it's sweet. Kind of creepy at the end, but still sweet. |
 red-headed psychopaths wanted 3/26/08 . chapter 1Ok, so at the beginning I was a little confused about where you were going with this. I wasn't sure if it was AU or just a twisted (in a good way of course .) add on to the story line. But when I realized that it was acutally a continuation of the story where L was still and all that it made the fic a whole lot cooler. I love how Misa doesn't remember anything and is totally oblivious to the fact that Masuda actually shot Light. lolz
The ending was very cool also, I loved how it all tied in withthe title. And the whole pillow detail added a lot to it.
It was very emotional and I loved it!
Great work! XD |
 kori hime 3/26/08 . chapter 1*flails* Freaky! And awesome! And really creepy! Ahh... How does one call from beyond the grave? Well, if anyone can figure THAT out, L could. ;; I love that you had the pervert line! ...I kinda had it running through my head in Japanese though... L: 'Watashi wa...hentai?' Hehehe. |
 BiOCaAM 3/26/08 . chapter 1Incredible! You managed to capture both of L and Misa's personalities so well. I can completely imagine both of them being in such a situation. Props to you for pulling off a very lovely oneshot. :D
-BiOCaAM |
 KataangKid 3/26/08 . chapter 1Exellent writing and fantastic story! A |
 Charried Away 3/26/08 . chapter 1Aww, what a sweet story! I have to say that I was a tad bit baffled at first (which isn‘t particularly surprising, I get confused far too easily), but by the end I was practically sniffling. You’re a fantastic writer too, I love the style, and how in-depth and emotional you made Misa without going into a first person perspective. Misa and pseudo-L struck me as in-character, as well.
I applaud you! |