Really good so far i really wanna know what happens. Please update!! But i don't get why she is american and he is japanese. Has she learnt to speak english or something sorry if i'm confusing you!
Please do more chapters

AW! So cute! =3 Yeah, she's a tad Mary-Sue-ish, but it's too early to tell. Nice job! You did a great job on this chapter!

Hey,

it's Cherrie-Sakura. I'm away from home atm and cbf logging in ;]
So, another great chapter, nya! :]
I'm really starting to like Riko, though make sure you add in little bits of description about her here and there; ie if for example her eyes widen in surprise at some point, mention what colour her eyes are, you know? If it were Ryou, it'd be: 'his piercing blue eyes widened in surprise'. Or if it were Ichigo: 'her large, chocolate brown eyes (some people use orbs) widened in surprise'. Just adding little details like this help shape a character to the audience :]
Watch out for typos as well - really proofread before you post, cos you'll pick them up yourself. It's just things like missing an 'o' in 'too', or spelling 'bear' as 'bare'. Things like that can be fixed easily :]
There was only one sentence that didn't make sense to me. It's was one related to Purin... Uh... this one!:
“Aw! She’s adorably with a little waitress outfit and everyone, so cute!” - Riko.
Did you mean:
'Aww! She's adorable, with the little waitress outfit and everything! So cute!'
or:
'Aww! She's adorablem with the little waitress outfit... And everyone - so cute!'
?
I was a little confused, but I read it as the first one, so yeah :]

GREAT chapter! Update soon, please - I'd love to know what happens next!

Cherrie-chan
xoxo

Phew! She's normal. *grin* Just kidding! I knew she'd be fine! *laugh* This is a really cute story so far! Please continue!

Aw! How sweet! ... Umm, is she going to be superhappy all the time like Pudding? That would be odd.

Very nice.
Riko's in America, yeah? Well, that's the impression I got ^^
Anyway, nicely written, again. Just watch it sometimes; you occasionally start the sentence with a verb, like 'Brushing','Coming', etc, and then go on to write a plain sentence. Like (ie) [quote] "Brushing her long t(h)igh length hair, Riko loved her hair, it was just like how her mother’s was." [end quote] That sentence doesn't really make sense. You should write her doing something else as well, ie 'Brushing her long t(h)igh length hair, Riko... moved to the mirror/tied it back in a ponytail, threaded ribbons through it (blah blah whatever). [THEN you'd put:] Riko loved her hair, it was just like how her mother’s was.'
Do you understand? It's not a big issue; just something small that, if changed, would help the story flow a little better.
That's all I had to say, really. Apart from that everything else is good =] Make sure you double check spelling for typos before you post. Update soon, 'kay? I shall be waiting for the next chapter! ^^
Cherrie-chan
xoxo

Hello. Is your name really Cybil? If so, that's so cool! ^^
Am I your first reviewer? Wowzers!
Nehoo I really like this, nya. It's interesting already - Riko sounds like an awesome character. Spelling and grammar were all fine, too. I hope you update soon!
Shall be waiting!
Cherrie-chan
xxo