This was really good. I liked it. Hope to read more from you.

nice story
please update ncis story

Excellent! You really got inside that story and the idea. You do really understand the mindset. Very well done!

Excellent. I love The Unit. Thanks for posting this.

I love how you show the "softer" side to Mack without taking him away from who he is. Great Work!

i like it keep it up

I enjoyed it.

nice loved the interaction though I think you should have read it through another time or two. I can't really see mack calling bob by pet names to his face. but other then that fairly good .liked that you had jonas looking out for mack as well.



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