 RobotKat 2008-03-26 . chapter 1First off, I stumbled upon this by accident while wandering over to the Astro Boy fiction section just to make fun of some fangirl's pitiful Mary Sue story.
However, I found your story at the top of the queue. I just about exploded with glee upon seeing it was all about Tenma.
This may very well be THE best Astro Boy story here. And I've read "Waltz for a Green-Haired Girl". You manage to keep everyone in character while painting a vivid description of Atom and Tenma's world. We've got elements of the two rebonding, Tenma and Ochanimizu clashing, all kinds of characters coming in, Tenma getting kidnapped, and the bizarre stuff with the therapist mixed into one tale. And it manages to work perfectly.
By the way, you're a part of the Astro Boy Online forums too? I'm Fauna over there. |