AH...

You're Kidding Me!

Pleasepleasepleaseplease update soon!

I wanna find out more! Especially who the king is...

Miss"L"

How could you leave us hanging like that! I have to know what's going on here. . First these can't be her freinds, but there is to much alike for it to be otherwis, unless this is like the other side of the looking glass or something. It can't be the underworld becous...does that mean they are going to see the king of the underworld? AH! There are just to many questions and not enough anwsers! You have to update this. This is just way to much fun to read. 0

interesting story... like it so far... what happened to lina... is she dreaming or something?... wonder what happens now... update when you can... please and thank you...

UPDATE!

This story is so good! Please, please, PLEASE update this!

ARE YOU EVER GOING TO UPDATE? ITS BEEN A LONG TIME! UPDATE!

wow, i didn't think you would ever get a chance to write more of this, but I am definitely glad that you have. I noticed that you changed the Queen parts to King now, change of plans maybe? lol, at any rate I really hope you can write more soon!

omgomgomgomgomg YOU UPDATED !

this is my favorite story PLEASE UPDATE SOON!

i was reading this at three am in the morning and im home alone. im so frickin scared.x.x

anyways up sate soon or im gonna stab you with a fork!

Excellent...

Glad to see Amelia and Sylphiel are going along. Lina better keep her eyes on Amelia.

O_O woah... write more, please... i am so weirded out! (but in a GOOD way, i promise) please continue, you write so well! _

YES! You updated! I'm so glad to see another update on this. I remeber reading it a while back. Another. . . interesting chapter again. I'm glad to see you writing again. I wish I could say the same. . . _ Anywho, I hope to see more updates soon. A little too short for my taste, but I'm patient and I understand good pieces take time.

'till the next chap,

Ciao. _

OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG!

I never thought I'd see the day! PLEASE finish this story!

Sadly, I don't think people will know that you rewrote the chapters. I don't think your story is bumped to the top again unless you add new chapters ( reads this story's last update as being 01/20/03). Just warning you to not expect much in the way of reviews yet.

Great to have you back!

Concidering all the Horror movies that I've suddenly become addicted to ever since I turned 14, that was quite mild. What a good horror story needs, is panic, a scence of the unknown. To be hunted with no end, until only the lucky few escape. Thats what I'm trying to accomplish in my crossover fics sequals, when Alissa and her new friends travel to the Universe of Chaos. I suspect... out of 30 of her friends, not including her... only five shall get out alive Wha'd you think? Doh... I gave my evil cliffie away... T.T

And then you stopped... COME BACK ONLINE, PLEASE!
Wah,
Diana-sama
STILL LOGGED IN! WOOT!

It's a real pity you decided stop writing this story. It's disturbing in a funny and original way, with some great description, characters and atmosphere.

Was looking forward to seeing where you were gonna go with this... and more whacked out Sylphiel, of course. _

Here's hoping you continue it someday.