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| danceoftheheart 2008-05-12 ch 7,  | abuseI don't know why but food works with sex very well when it comes to these two. Maybe we're inspired by Grissom bringing in take out for Sara in early season 7 so it's easy to picture them messing around. I don't know but I've used it to my advantage more than one. Very very cool drabble. |
| danceoftheheart 2008-05-12 ch 6, | abuseoh chocolate and sex...Loved this one. I grinned ear to ear while reading it. |
| danceoftheheart 2008-05-12 ch 5, | abuseI liked the mature tone of this one. Very cryptic...almost poetic. |
| danceoftheheart 2008-05-12 ch 4, | abuseHAHAHAHAHA...paint samples and babies...perfect |
| danceoftheheart 2008-05-12 ch 3, | abuseOhh. Really liked this one. It was serious but sweet and tender too. Just like I picture them. Nice Nice tone. |
| danceoftheheart 2008-05-12 ch 2, | abuseCute ending. I'd love to believe Gil would have the guts to do that...well, after season 8 I'm sure he would...but before? Hm. Still, creates a yummy picture. |
| danceoftheheart 2008-05-12 ch 1, | abuseOh...sweet beginning. A perfect 'A' Ps...how sweet were you to mention me in your note! |
| charming-kayleigh 2008-05-11 ch 11, | abuseAhw, this was so cute. I love the way you can make a story with such little words. Thanks for writing. *~*kay |
| WalkerTRngr 2008-05-10 ch 11, | abuseAw!! :) |
| PJC 2008-05-09 ch 11, | abuseaw, this was such a sweet chapter, and yay Gil and Sara have a little baby girl, and they are still perfect together. aw good chapter update soon (please) P x |
| toothchick 2008-05-09 ch 11, | abuseKeep the knight-in-shining armour & the kute kid, too!! OK, OK I know it's a pretty lame review, I totally bombed this one!! I'll try to do better for 'L'... |
| BrookeGreene 2008-05-09 ch 11, | abuseOh I always hated that whole "Finders keepers, losers weepers" saying. But then if I "find" Grissom, I might change my hating ways... lol. But seriously that thing is so stupid! And since this review window has been open for about 30 min, and I've long since closed the story window (but I can still remember it of course), I shall conclude this review. By saying that I like it. It was very good. =D |
| csimouse 2008-05-09 ch 11, | abuseYou are doing wonderful! |
| jade40 2008-05-09 ch 11, | abuseso cute anything with babies and gsr is awesome excellent as always :) |
| Chelles 2008-05-09 ch 11, | abuseWhat, she doesn't get a name? Or, are you like me, and totally freaking out over naming a geek baby? I've only written one story that made Grissom and Sara parents, and I think the hardest part about the entire process was picking a name for their child. Yes, this is a reason I should never have children of my own - I'd never be able to name them! This was a very sweet glimpse into the life the writers should give Grissom and Sara. As always, I love it! |