it's been almost a year since you last update! get on with the story!

LOVED IT! I'm glad you finally undated! =] Can't wait for more!

OMG ITS SO GOOD. ah keep writing please. haha its so good i wanna keep reading so badly. thx


wynn

omg. amazing chapter!

Another awesome chapter! Great ending! Update soon please.

OMG!
KEEP WRITING! FOR THE LOVE OF GOD! KEEP WRITING!

Nice start. I look forward to reading more.

I'm so happy you have the sequel up =] update soon!!

I'm intrigued:). The only critique I have about the writing is that it seems like you're listing the events, instead of telling them. Try to use more description and take more time describing the different things that are going on:).

And I found a few grammar mistakes...

'"Absolutely No!"'
'No' shouldn't be capitalized.

'"Exactly the point, in case you don't remember, tonight at exactly 11:13pm is my re-ascension."'
After '"Exactly the point,"' it should be a period or a semi-colon.

YAY! All done. As I said before, good job:). This story is intriguing.

awesome chapter =)
aw blake's such a good girlfriend!

this is a great begining

ahh so good update soon! please!

I loved it cant wait for the update

great start ! can't wait until chapter 2

YAY FOR A SEQUEL! awesome start! great writing...update soon please!