While I adore LuNa to bits and pieces, the thing that made this fic shine so much was the thought you put into both Nami and Luffy's convictions to protect their own dreams. Nami to make a map of the world and Luffy to become the Pirate King, which would need Nami. Thank you!

hooray for the bit of LuNa at the end! also thanks for not making it a drabble because drabbles are too short.

xD This was cute~ What a good find for me, I'll be watching now.

I thought it made sense. Not really a drabble, but it's still good.

This was really good, write more of these!

Shishishishi. Melike. :) Sweet little Nami and Luffy fics in which they don't go out of character. I think I might squee~

*favorit'd and alert'd*

very cute but way too short :o

Good stuff. Hope to see more of your One Piece writing. :)

Well I wouldn't say you Phail at LuNa, but you most certainatly Phailed at the dabble part.

I don't see any OOC-ness in this, what you talking about square-nose?

You're actually better than you give yourself credit for.

Nami comparing herself to the crew members chasing their dreams [She and Usopp have that dilemma] and self-sacrificing herself by not involving the rest is pretty much IC to me, so kudos for that.

The final part when she is screaming "Idiot" at him, the description and the dialogs because they are close to characterization [yes, they really are] was great, the scene went pretty well in my head.

Oh my gawd, what did you say that? You definitely don't fail, you win! XD This was very sweet and Luffy/Nami were in-character~ (not confusing at all like you said XD) It was perfect for me ♥ Just what I wanted to read ^__^ ♥ Thanks for sharing!

Oh my gosh, that was so...so...squee! Rest assured, you don't have to squint and stand on your head to see the LuNa...it's cute! ^_^ ANd I really like your matter-of-fact writing style.