That's a sweet idea, to revise Murphy's Law. I enjoyed the fic plenty.

I liked it! Especially how James is still a little bit clueless!

hi

i love your writing style..its subltle,but nonetheless fantastic..

I think this story is amazing

this is so sweet! just how i would imagine james and faults whatsoever.

Wow, this was so sweet, and I love how you turned Murphy's Law around. I like it much better from the more optimistic point of view. Also, this story just made for some really good reading. ]

Now, I CAN'T BELIEVE I hadn't reviewes in this story before. I loved it when I read it, so much I wanted to translate it...Ugh. So, anyway, let me review now: this story is so cute and romantic, I love it. I must ask you: can I translate it? Please? I'd put all the credits to you in my profile page (btw, have you seen my thanks there for the RL portuguese version?) and in the story. What do you say? :)

hey lexie.

as with most well done romance oneshots this one made me melt as i sat here reasding. i truly appreciate a good romance and this one is great. trying to find words to define it, cant, it truly does seem like the perfect little moment, great work.

josh

particularly special. Hogwarts remains firmly beneath their feet, and although a deathly silence falls over the nearby portraits-

James pulls away, smiling.

Lily smiles back, confused.

“That was actually a lot easier that I thought,” he confides in a rush, so relieved that she’s once again shocked and a little insulted. “I mean –“

Merlin, it must be written all over her face….

“I mean, it took quite a bit to pluck up the courage to do that, and in the end…. I’ve been standing here talking myself into it for a good half hour, I’ll have you know!”

I loved the ending. This story was absolutely fantastic! I loved it!

Wow, really…different. You do love James and Lily, don’t you? :D It was really sweet, Just like all your stories (OK, all your one shots. I haven’t read the chapter fics yet…)

Darn, I need to stop rambling like this in the reviews. It was really enjoyable.

That was most enjoyable! You should consider writing the script for some sort of romantic comedy one day. Their awkward mannerisms were great, I like the colloquialism (?) of their speech, it was very appropriate considering how I don't really like that in most stories. Great job once again!

This is so sweet! I wish there was more!

Your James/Lily stories are so...exciting and interesting to read. This one was very good! Thanks for the great read! :)

LOVED this! lily and james are so great...:) Fabulous job!

This was one of the best LJ I ever read :)

well done, lexie!

don't you just want to give james a big hug. he's so cuddle-able!

very nice potrayal of both the characters. and james is rather daring, is he not?