Hmm...Although this one makes more sense with all the mentions of the other people, I do like the first one better. I quite enjoyed the scene where Remus checks the bed around him for Yoko. XD
--Chaos (Chichiro Ketsueki)

So far so good, Kaze. :P I admit I'm only gonna read the pancake drabbles, though, 'cause you specifically asked about those.
You write cutesy romance suspiciously well, my romantically clueless friend. ;)
Remus and Yoko, though? Huh. o__O The pairings keep getting stranger...
--Chaos (Chichiro Ketsueki)

^^ Good! I noticed a few spelling mistakes... You know I'd be willing to beta for you and fix those things, right?

Good! ^^; You certainly like posting random stuff you write in Creative Writing, don't you?