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| Siren of the Darknessflame 2008-07-19 ch 7, | abuseluvved the fic put how is carlton gonna get shawn back. oh no. |
| Asuka-Was-Here 2008-07-10 ch 7, | abuseOh no, not an evil!Shawn... Carlton better track him down and whip some sense into him ASAP! But, that aside, this is still a really compelling story, so keep it up! -Asuka |
| Olivia Sutton 2008-07-06 ch 7, | abuseHiya - I think that was my favorite chapter so far. And that *kiss*, wow - even if it means Shawn's gone all dark side - wow! Carlton was wonderful in this too, I love how you're writing him. And I sense angst coming, if he's going to try to get *his* Shawn back rather than what seems to be demon-Shawn. Evil hunters? I assuming this *wasn't* Sam and Dean using false names, they certainly didn't sound like Sam and Dean anyways (mind you, I've only seen seasons 1 & 2 so far). Love the credit on the bottom. --Olivia |
| anonymous 2008-07-06 ch 7, anon. | abuseThis is brilliant! Such a great idea...I love Psych, Supernatural, and Scrubs, but I'm not daring enough to mix them all. :) Very well-written, and I like how you handle the relationship between Shawn and Lassie. Part of me wants to see more of Sam and Dean (mostly because I love them), but I also like how you treat them as side characters. It's a cool meshing of the universes, and I like it. Keep up the good work! |
| Olivia Sutton 2008-06-30 ch 6, | abuseThat was awesome! Tho' I wouldn't have minded seeing just a tad more of the Winchester boys, esp. Sam. Yep, a friend got me hooked on *Supernatural* - watched the season 1 DVDs in a couple of weeks, and managed to watch season 1 in a single week, even with working almost full time at the tech school. Anyway, I love this story, and I keep wanting to see more. Carlton asking Shawn to move in was quite sweet. I would have liked to see just a tad bit more of a reaction from Carlton upon finding Shawn in the ghost-town tho. And who was Caleb? I thought it was Bobby who was with Dean when he found Sam? Anyway, take care. Awesome story! --Olivia |
| theakatsukiiscoming 2008-06-30 ch 6, anon. | abuseHello! (I have an account but I'm too lazy to log in.) Anyways, this story is really good, and I hope you update it soon! Also, I think something about the summary is the only reason that you don't have more reviews, (I really think this story should have alot more reviews. I didn't read it at first because the summary didn't seem interesting enough, and it sounded like it was based more on Carlton.) So, yeah. Just thought I'd say, I pretty much love all your stories (the ones i've read, anyway, you have so many!) And also, you are the person who turned me on to Dexter, which is, in my opinion, a totally awesome show. |
| butch16423 2008-06-29 ch 6, | abusegreat story-update son karen and juliet are "the charmed ones?" do they knew about Lassie? -- because apparently Lassie does not know about them |
| PSYCHFAN 2008-06-22 ch 5, anon. | abuseOMG! i love this story too!! you are an amazing writer. please please PLEASE update soon!! :] |
| Alexi Moonshine 2008-06-22 ch 5, | abusePlease, please, please tell me you are updating this soon, because it is fantastic! Love the blend of romance/action/supernatural, with a little bit of comedy (and seriously, a Scrubs crossover? Last thing I was expecting, but it was awesome). I love how you characterize Carlton and Shawn, and I can't wait to find out what the deal is with Azazel. I think my favorite part, though, was when Shawn told Gus about his powers and everything...I don't know, it was just really nice to see that moment of friendship, and I hope there will be more of Gus here. Ah, this is just great, keep up the good work. |
| Asuka-Was-Here 2008-06-06 ch 5, | abuseI have come to the conclusion that I simply love everything you write (even if I'm a failure for not always saying so) - however, this latest chapter in particular was just particularly wonderful - serious and all action-packed, but still full of happy relationship progression and, of course, just the right hint of humor (that last line really cracked me up). I do love the whole concept of this story, and I hope to see you update soon with a lot more! Keep it up! :) |
| Olivia Sutton 2008-06-02 ch 5, | abuseHi-- I first found this story on one of the Psych LJ communities, but I am VERY happy you are re-posting it here in full, it's easier to keep track of the story that way. I'm enjoying the story a lot (and I've never seen *Supernatural* - I'm going to borrow it from a friend this summer to watch). I love the whole idea of Carlton Lassiter being part-demon, and of him coaching Shawn in his own powers. Lassie does seem a bit different than his character in canon, but I like the changes -- he's so tough, yet has a darkness to his character as well. I can't wait for more! Please update soon! --Olivia |
| Scarecrow2413 2008-05-30 ch 5, | abuseYESS!! yesyesyesyesyesyesyes!! Another update! Hooray! Oh it was well worth the wait, too! Thank you for updating- I LOVE this story!! There's quite a few stories I absolutely adore and this is definitely make top favs. Everything about it is awesome. I can't wait till next chapter!! The part where he goes by 'Coal' is similar to 'Carl' is win! And that scene where he confronts other supernatural beings, saving Shawn, and exposing his secret- is TOTAL WIN!! XD Man I can rant on and on of how awesome of a writer you are and how awesome this tory is- but I'm sure you already know. Thanks again for posting, and update soon, k? Ja! ^_^ |
| Kathy 2008-05-29 ch 5, anon. | abuseAwesome chapter! I've been waiting for the next chapter of this story ever since I found it on the Shawn_Lassiter com on LJ. Awesome!! Please write more!! |
| TamarackPines 2008-04-16 ch 4, | abuseI LOVE this story! You are a PHENOMENAL writer and I hope you'll update soon. Cause this is too good of a yarn to gather dust and mold! ^_~ Sin, TamarackPines |
| Scarecrow2413 2008-04-03 ch 4, | abuseAww, I love how Lassiter has an inner battle within himself between the demon self and hunter self. I would love to read more on that. Hee, it's great already XD Very sweet, definite favs. I'm eager for more- Can't wait! ^_^ |