this was so sweet...

Pretty chapter. Very sweet and innocent. Blow out chapter with everything revealed should be good. Update soon.

~Chica~

saw this story, read it and love it...but will u make sure pndora/bastian get some action...n i loved the shower and forest sexy scenes...so much chemistry...though h8 how all friends hav ** each other...why did mason hav to be pandora's 1st...damn...

pan/seb forever,they r meant to be...can u get bella/mason together n maybe out of the equation...yay,cece's back but don't make her evil

Loved how Sebastian can pick up on her heat before anyone else, including herself. Looking forward to seeing how everything plays out when Pandora's first heat partner is revealed.

So a year's passed by since Pandora's first heat. The identity of Pandora's heat partner is known only by three people, two of which were actually involved in the act. How will Sebastian react when he finds out Pandora was with Mason? Things are quite like they used to be, and once Mason's role in all of this is revealed, I just can't help but think things will go badly...but maybe I'm wrong...UPDATE SOON!

~Chica~

Oh, I adore Sky High! Warren was awesome in that movie! It makes me wonder if Manticore could have made a transgenic that spouted flames from his hands; Ah, the possibilites. Plus, I totally have a thing for Disney movies so, yeah, Pogue is now a fave of mine in this fic! And now I wanna go watch Sky High again...

Great chappy, by the way :D

Melissa

Oh man! So we got a little fill of Max/Alec goodness. Pogue was a jerk but kind to Pandora in this chapter (or as kind as an enemy can be). And Sebastian found her but she wanted nothing to do with him. Wonder how things will turn up, especially for Alec, when they all find out their golden child had sex with an Ordinary. Hahaha. OH MAN! Update soon!

~Chica~

Wow - this chapter was awesome! I liked how you played it all out, with both POV's and the little tidbit of Sebastian thrown in. Though I do have a question : I could be wrong, but I thought I read somewhere earlier in the story that heats didn't affect Sebastian??

Either way, great chapter!!

Melissa

That. Was. Hot!

Oh No!! Love triangles, or squares I suppose cause there's four of them, suck!!
How are they all gonna cope with this one! Can't wait to read more!

Oh my...holy crap...I just...wow. That was INCREDIBLE! Oh my gosh! You totally did everything I wanted and so much more. I can only imagine what you're going to write next chapter. I mean seriously! If Sebastian was able to tell, he will probably die knowing he wasn't the one who had his sweet Pandora first. And yet I feel like Pandora has been vindicated, even if she probably regrets so much. Plus, we had to throw in Mason. He gets left out of everything and it's just not fair. Oh my gosh. You are amazing. You rocked it out so well. I swear I feel like it's my birthday and I got the best little treat. Thank you! Update soon!

~Chica~

that little hoochie wanted pandora to catch them! omg! i totally don't like her anymore!

I'm glad Pandora finally knows. Can't wait to see how they all react to this.

I really like this. Though when I first started reading it, I was SURE Pandora would end up with Mason, with the whole 'Max and Logan weren't meant for each other but their kids...' dealio but I really like the Sebastian aspect :)

I can't wait to read more!

Melissa

Poor Pandora, stupid Sebastian...well stupid men in general really!
Looking forward to finding out how everyone deals with this revelation!