Awesome story... I love it! Roxas cheats on his wife with axel... really good.. this would make a awesome multipart story in my opinion but its great by itself too!!

OH ADULTERY. OH FUCK. OH I REMEMBER THAT DRAWING, IT IS A FUCKING FAVORITE AND I ALWAYS THOUGHT THERE WAS SOMETHING REALLY HEAVY GOING ON IN THERE (mainly because of the wedding ring, yes) and I remember AGES ago when Erin did this journal thing where she posted like everything ppl had written for her work (or colored her lineart). I know I read a fic or two based on that one, but I don't think I read THIS one, and dude, THIS ONE IS THE BEST. The others...well. It was like how some of her lineart was colored with colored pencils and looked not nearly as amazing as the digitally painted stuff done by those who could REALLY do art. (And I should probably not say these things in a public forum, because those kids meant well and Erin obvious appreciated ALL their efforts.) But srsly, those other oneshots were kinda dumb compared to this. THIS makes me HUNGER for more. Like their relationship after this happened, and the lies, deceptions, and forbidden love. Lack of control, illicit affair...UNGH. LOVE FOR ALL THESE THINGS. (I need some more affair fics now. Fuck, where do I find this? GOOD ONES I mean.) Srsly, the emotional complications and depth and darkness involved...soo ANGSTY and yet so POWERFUL. *shivers* Yowzers. OK. Hey, fun day for me! FILLED WITH SMUTS BY YOU. XD XD *snuggle*

oh wow, i really liked that. not your usual oneshot where the two are just totally ready to jump each other. it had a nice plot to it too. good work!

Ah... this fic is terrible and wonderful at the same time. The writing is wonderful, the emotion and set-up are great... It's a great piece... It's terribly sad, but at the same time, deliciously wicked.

It's so realistic... I love it and hate it all at the same time, and of course I am fav-ing it.

The line from Roxas' wedding vows at the end is the clincher for me. Makes me stop and think.

Fantastic job with this! I can imagine it would be hard to write something like this, an unpopular idea in the world of fanfiction where we expect happy endings and fool-proof romances.

:D they had sexy time on the desk!

Wow, this was pretty hot. I'm usually not one for office romances, but... :)

The title also reminds me of that fic ronsard wrote, and I have to say that your version is also good, and makes me cry a lot less.

*speechless*
great,great,great and GREAT (i'm so uncreative in choosing words,haha)
like it,,very much!

oh this is so delicious and sad! :(

Yevon? lol that's cool. love how you put a little FF in it ^^ *claps hand* good story!

Aw... Uhm, go Axel? Maybe? xD A cheating Roxy I never like, but when he's not WITH Axie in the first place... then I don't really care who he's cheating on :D I'm evil :)

Loved it :)

wow... almost as if the priest KNEW roxas was really gay... he was just waiting to discover it in axel... lol... this is good... and so is nijuuni's art! lol... you know that pic that she did for waiting? well... ima color it! >< it's gonna be so fun... just hope that i can do her art justice...
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Ug, I can't even begin to tell you how much I love the way you write. The gift of detail you've been endowed with is just phenomenal, and it really inspires me.

Great job, as always. 83

You know, I'm not really sure what to think. I should hate it because of the cheating but honestly...I love it. Descriptive and realistic. Because let's be honest; the world isn't perfect and we all know that occassionally the right person for you is going to appear /after/ you're happily married. I love it. A lot. Have a fantabulous day, hope to see something else from you soon!

Wow... That was...

IT WAS AWESOME. I loved that art, and this was every better! WHOO FOR FICS THAT GO WITH AWESOMELY AWESOME ART!

Great Job!

~Thatz

oh wow amazing!

I loved Nijuuni's art of this and now i have a wonderful story to go with it XD excellent writing! i am still amazed at your skills :) Your smut is fantastic too! ;P