This part is pretty good. Thought I'm more of an action girl, this story is keeping me till the end! Love ya! Btw, maybe you should consider making more supernatural stories. They are great, and considering that everyone is writing about them, you should try it too. I'm writing a supernatural story and one of my OC's is a vampire. Please consider. If your this good at it, then give it another try. Keep writing peeps!

Poor Amy. I feel really sorry for her. She killed Sonic. That really isn't that hard you know

Krystal: She could take up may offer.
Me: I know but this is HER awesome story not mine.
Krystal: Whatever. Just because I'm a goddess does mean I have to mature.
Me: Shut up, Damnit!
Me: The story line was great! It kept me guessing, which is very hard to do. This story is going on my favorites! WooT! Keep writing peeps!

heh heh, sensual. You are good.
(I forget how fun vampires can be.)

great story! loved the lemon! it was very interesting, but the feeling in it was real between the two hedgehogs!

BAH!

I absolutely LOVED this.

Seriously. Kudos!

The end scene was kinky while all the while sweet and passionate... You could really "picture" the whole thing and understand what Amy was feeling. I loved this story. You are an inspiration, truly!

I love how particularly naughty this is and how quickly you make the characters become intimate, while still managing to keep them in character... I'd usually advise against moving things so rapidly but you really make it work! Excellent!

Oh-oh my gosh. I loved this! At first, (okay, no offense,) I was like, "jeez, another vampire thing, la de dahh," and I was about to stop reading. But I read a few sentences further and then a few more... And, wow, this is good! I finished the whole chapter without getting distracted... Which, rather sadly, is a somewhat rare thing for me. Really, really, really great job! I'll be sure to keep reading soon.

god i love this story. you are such a good writer prosha! i cant wait for the new one!

O.O That's it!? It's over! DX Noo!

OMG OMG OMG! That was so awesome! Are you done writing? There has to be more! DO NOT LEAVE ME HANGING!

OwO
wOW...-blush-

the ending was so cute. i love vampire eroticism and i hope to read more from you

Great writing, make sure to write more!!:3 That got me turned on a bit.XD

wow...amazing word choice. Thoroughly pleased :)