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Reviews For: The Secret Life of Rhonda

Avengers Fan
2008-05-15
ch 1, anon.
abuseGood pastiche on The Secret Life of Walter Mitty - but you need to tweak this a bit.

1-the word is led, not lead (I make this mistake occasionally, and fix it in the final draft)

2-It is Gale, not Gail.

3-You are missing a lot of periods and commas -- this could be your word program.
Susicar
2008-03-31
ch 1,
abuseOh, this is completely weird, but i liked. It is the time of the Rhonda's revenge!! Well done. I has read your profile and i know you liked Tara. You think write about her? We have very few fics with Tara here *sigh* Thank for sharing, and sorry for my language, i don't speak English.
Gale Force
2008-03-26
ch 1,
abuseWa-ell...I liked most of it... the ending, not so much so. Still, well done! Interesting take.
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