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| Avengers Fan 2008-05-15 ch 1, anon. | abuseGood pastiche on The Secret Life of Walter Mitty - but you need to tweak this a bit. 1-the word is led, not lead (I make this mistake occasionally, and fix it in the final draft) 2-It is Gale, not Gail. 3-You are missing a lot of periods and commas -- this could be your word program. |
| Susicar 2008-03-31 ch 1, | abuseOh, this is completely weird, but i liked. It is the time of the Rhonda's revenge!! Well done. I has read your profile and i know you liked Tara. You think write about her? We have very few fics with Tara here *sigh* Thank for sharing, and sorry for my language, i don't speak English. |
| Gale Force 2008-03-26 ch 1, | abuseWa-ell...I liked most of it... the ending, not so much so. Still, well done! Interesting take. |