LMFAO! I can totally imagine Shigure say "It's a place for friends!" HAHA!

omg this is amazing! i have a myspace and dont even know how to change the background so the characyers are apparently smarter than me! lol loved it

ooh i didnt read the thing at the top that says "complete" lol im so dumb! but anyways i loved it! ja ne!~

aw come on please update! ive been waiting for so long! ja ne!~ update asap!

i love it so much!! thank u! can u please update!!? im waiting !! ja ne!~ update asap!

oh i know im gonna love this fanfic! ja ne!~ update asap!

Things I liked:
Yes! Computer addiction showed perfectly!
Hana's page really suits her
Aww the end was adorable

~Myst
Things that I didn't like:
Pace is a little rushed

Things I liked:
Lol I like that line - "Is this thing going to blow up?"
I like the colors of the laptops
"most of it was from his fan club saying "I LOVE YOU YUKI!" or his brother saying the same thing" XD that line rocked
I love how you keep making Shigure have these plans

~Myst
Things that I didn't like:
Dell!!? God those machines are crap! (sorry, dad's a computer software programming engineer so the house has twelve desktop computers *returns to her MacBook*) and they're not even Japanese model right?
"First we need to found how" - wrong tense
Shigure is speaking with Machi and Kimi 0.o he's never met them how does he know who they are!?
Tohru seems really OoC to me - would she ever be this open about her feelings for Kyo and if so she would probably save it until it either slipped or she found the strength to tell him.

Things I liked:
I love how they seem protective of her when she's making the account
I can see Yuki and Kyo getting thousands of page hits and friend requests now
Lol, the AIM conversation amused me - although why American IM when they're Japanese
I'm scared to think of what might happen next XD

Ways to improve:
Separate dialogue depending on who's speaking

~Myst
Things that i didn't like:
I'm surprised she's not calling him Shigure-san
Yuki didn't sound like himself to me but that may be because I'm a two/three year Yuki fangirl

Things I liked:
Lol, Shigure does seem the type to have a MySpace - I fortunately, don't use mine or haven't since October. Aww he has one friend
Pretty fun story idea XD

Ways to improve:
Include some more nonverbal communication
~Myst

Geez... That was random.

aww... that was sweet in the end! i hope this isn't the end of the story, i want to see more mayhem on MySpace!

That was one of the cutest ending's I have ever read, I really enjoyed your story, well done, please keep up the good work!

Love, Love Inc. x

oh cool they broke the curse. i didn't know it could be broken. that was another great chapter. thanx ^_^!

good chapter, off to read the next one now ^_^!