hey!
wa!you written fanfiction about lavi and allen?cool!(what a lovely pairing *o*)
but sorry I'm french,so I can't read fanfic how long ^^"
aha I guess you're wondering:"so why is she here?"
well,you know I'm french and "je vis en espoir" isn't a good translation about:"I live in hope"...
I think it's better to say :"je vis en espérant" or "je vis dans un espoir" but it's not a title which underline a good story...maybe:"je vis en gardant l'espoir" but it's too long...
perhaps:"je vis dans l'espoir de..."
yeah the last one is better...
oh yes it's just a tip ^^"
so you do whatever you want yeah...
and scuse me for my bad english ^^"

so is there a sequal? i really like these stories

yea!! that was so cute!!

cyute! Brilliant writing

COL. I've read all four installments, and loved them! You write the pairing very well. :) Plus, I was wondering: any way you can get us link for the fanart that inspired you? Just curious. :3

Hope there's more, but this would be a great ending as well!

Wow, wow, wow. All of these stories are wonderful, but this might be the best one so far (although it is really hard to choose just one...). I think I like this one the best because of the emotions that surfaced in Lavi during Allen's near fatal injury. And in turn, Allen's emotions in response to Lavi's near-sacrificial suicide for him. It was brilliant, and (as always) a pleasurable read.

The two things that really stood out for me that I wanted to comment on being absolutely amazing were: 1) Lavi's Innocence. You portrayed it so intelligently, in a way that I never thought about. The seals actually having personalities--wonderful concept! 2) Bookman's story about Lavi's past. A wonderful tool to tie in the reasons for Lavi's actions, and a nice story as well!

Very well done, overall, and I'm definitely looking forward to another. I can always hope for that lime/lemon (-hopeful-) but this was NOT a disappointment at all. And if you don't get down to some hot action, that's fine, as these stories are so wonderfully written that you can keep me coming back for more even without porn :D

BTW: Thanks for PMing me. I'd never have found this if it wasn't for that!

*faving*

I seriously seriously LOVE this story. Your writing flows (unlike mine) and all your character's are in character in OOC way. This story is the best I have ever read and is definitely going into my favourite story list. I'm not really a Lavi/Allen person but seriously, when I read this fic, I'm just like OMG, it's absolutely brilliant.

And that sequel - seriously, write. I somehow or other am fine with lemons, (even though they give me the shivers - only 13) I'm sure you'll do brilliantly with the plot cause well - after reading this story, there isn't anything else that's possible.

On a side note, I just want to ask a question. How in the world do you manage to write something so long? You are pure genius, honestly.

Wow, this is the longest review ever, so your probably getting bored... Keep up the good work though!!