Loved it. Is it a one-shot or a story? If it's a one-shot, I'd mark it as complete; If it's a story, Update!

wow love it..
jamie

great start

Continue soon, please. I love stories where Jess and Rory hang out it California. And road trip stories are even better. So, good idea. Good writing, too.

please continue i love it

good chapter & more please

Great start. I can't wait to see what Lorelei and Luke are going to say about this. My guess is it isn't going to be pretty!